Sunday, March 17, 2013

Character Development and Redevelopment

Trying to make Mrs. R less formal and more... motherly.
Trying to make Mr. R have more of a personality.
Tis fun.

Saturday, March 16, 2013

Yay Revising

Which... looks a lot like rewording things at the moment.  There isn't much I can do on the first three pages except be a little more descriptive and fix typos.

My friend wants the next book.  I can't hand it to her because I split this one in half.  So, it's not like she'd make edits and I would go cry in a corner... it's more like she'd make edits that I'd just look at and say "Yeah, I know.  I just haven't gotten there yet."

Currently, I have until June 30th to get this polished.  That's when my five free copies expire.  I've got basically two-and-a-half months.

Here goes!


Friday, March 15, 2013

Picking up the rewrites again...

Dropped them 'cause school was crazy.
But the plan is to pick them up again.
1 hour a day.  At least.
Let's see how this goes.
*must be persistent*